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X-Men Pitch Week 3: Pitch 3 ‘X-Calibre: The Damocles Foundation’

The Damocles Foundation

by Loz Cook

The Pitch

Emma Steed and her son Jasper form an advanced branch of the British Hellfire Club named the Damocles Foundation. The members are the Marauder Malice who has possessed the sorcerer Feron, psychic vampire Selene, and crazed sorcerer Grave Moss.

Their main goal is the complete subjugation and control of the British Empire. To do this they need to get rid of MI:13, the Royal family, and Britain’s connection to the multiversal control of Roma, Merlin, and Saturnine, and claim lost bloodstones so that they can each live long enough to enjoy their Reign.

The conflict comes in several forms; Captain Britain, Secret MI:13 agent Switchback who has been tasked with monitoring the 616 universe for Fury or Jim Jaspers level threats, Elsa Bloodstone who has been tasked with protecting bloodstones, and finally the fact that no member of the Damocles Foundation can trust or be trusted by any of the other members.

The Cast

Emma Steed
One of the standout characters from the whole of the Age of Apocalypse was Damask from X-Calibre. I knew she would be the star of my villain book. Everything she does is calculated to one end. Even her weakness for her adopted son Jasper will not stop her from her goals. She needs bloodstones to make sure she lives long enough to enjoy her domination of the British Isles and surrounding seas. Will she get her bloodstone?

Jasper
Jasper is my favorite creation for this pitch. At the end of the Captain Britain storyline where Jim Jaspers fought the Fury, Saturnine takes a DNA sample from the deceased Jim Jaspers. As far as I’m aware, this was never addressed again. Enter Jasper, the cloned child amalgamation of Jim Jaspers and the Fury. He’s the arrogant, petulant-child version of the crazed Jim Jaspers. He wants a bloodstone Mummy, and he wants one NOW. Will he get his bloodstone?

Malice/Feron
Originally my pitch only included four main characters, but then each contributor got their wild cards. Mine was Malice and while I could have brushed her off, I decided to make her an integral part of the story. Originally Jasper was going to be the big bad, but things change. Malice has already possessed the budding new MI:13 agent Feron when the pitch starts. Malice needs bloodstones to become corporeal and not have to possess others. Will she get a bloodstone?

Selene
I needed a long-term X-men Villain to balance out the lesser known picks in my pitch and I’ve always wondered what Selene would do after being resurrected in Brian Woods X-men run. Here, she’s going to the root of her Roman colony connection and will take a swing at the British Empire. All she wants is to live forever and not have to worry about draining others of their lives. Will she get a bloodstone?

Grave Moss
Grave Moss was only in three issues of Excalibur, but I loved his character. I needed to introduce the idea of mystical weaponry, and magic being a big part of the pitch. He’s a crazy sorcerer and all he wants is his own soul sword … which he gets, but will he get a bloodstone?

Emma Steed

Antagonists

Captain Britain – You can’t have a British-based, X-related book without Captain Britain. If the Lighthouse is the 616 nexus for access to Otherworld, and the Damocles Foundation wants to sever that connection forever, they will have to go through Captain Britain. And they will.
Tangerine – She’s my telepathic foil for Emma Steed, and I love her 70s aesthetic.
Switchback – The other standout character from X-Calibre was Switchback. For the purposes of this story, I changed the gender and gave him some upgrades in the power department. He now has a pair of stylized psionic guns that shoot bullets that temporarily revert his targets bodies violently to a previous state. He has been tasked by MI:13 to monitor the UK for signs of Fury-related attacks and to deal with the threats as they arise. Jasper falls completely into this category.
Motormouth – I loved reading Motormouth and Dark Angel as a kid and loved how they represented the part of the world where I came from. I didn’t learn about Excalibur until a bit later, but if I had to replace Kitty Pryde as a member of Excalibur, Motor Mouth would be the replacement. Of course this version is the older one with two kids, but still the same level of bad-assery.
Elsa Bloodstone – And talking of bad-assery, You can’t have a book featuring a villain team who want bloodstones without the coolest, baddest Bloodstone of them all. Really, there’s always a part of my creative mind that is looking for a story in which to insert either Elsa or Cullen.

Jasper

First Year Summary

Issue 1: Beautiful Stranger

Selene

Issue 2: Get Together

Grave Moss

Issue 3: Gone

SCENE:
Faiza: “Freeze dirtbag.” She uses her powers to separate Jasper into all his visual body components. Faiza then goes to do the same to Emma. Just as Tangerine and Emma are about to defeat Emma, they hear Jasper.

Jasper: “Cool. Sword in the stone.” Excalibur flies out of Faiza’s hands and lodges itself in a boulder that has grown out of the floor. She runs to retrieve Excalibur.

Jasper: “Frieze, dirtbag.” Faiza is smeared across a nearby wall in a multicolored mural/painting with an expanded look of shock across the wall.

Captain Britain

Issue 4: The Power of Goodbye

Tangerine

Issue 5: Sky Fits Heaven

Motormouth

Issue 6: Give It 2 Me

Switchback

Issue 7: Impressive Instant

Elsa Bloodstone

Issue 8: Die Another Day

Epilogue

Malice/Feron

 

There it is. Pitch three. This one was a lot of fun to create, and I wanted a villain book where the villains succeed and win. Of course, this whole pitch would continue on with another chapter where we are introduced to the X-Men team that would have to deal with the Damocles Foundation, I can see them already. And, maybe that book would be the downfall of Emma Steed, Jasper, and their new empire, but for now, I’ll let Emma revel in her victory.

 

I just wanted to say thanks to a couple of people. Thank you Craig Black who colored my pictures and made them so fantastic. I’m completely in love with how they turned out.

Also, thank you Mike for help with the Logo. It’s awesome.

Lastly, thank you Tyler who graciously gave Pitch Week 3 a place to live. You’re all F.A.B.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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